When writing I have learned to give your background knowledge first then go and research about my topic that I care about. You should also have sentence variety. I also learned that if your sentence is very short you should add it to your next sentence that you are going to write or type. You should also cite the text so you can refer back to it. You should also have personal connections to yourself or what you think about the topic. You should also have strong powerful topic sentences to tell about your paragraph.
I picked the piece titled Fast Food because in interested me. Also it interested me because a lot of people like fast food and people die from fast food and get obese.
In conclusion I improved in my vocabulary and also I improved in my sentence variety. I think I improved because last year in fifth grade I didn’t write in paragraphs.
When writing I have learned to give your background knowledge first then go and research about my topic that I care about. You should also have sentence variety. I also learned that if your sentence is very short you should add it to your next sentence that you are going to write or type. You should also cite the text so you can refer back to it. You should also have personal connections to yourself or what you think about the topic. You should also have strong powerful topic sentences to tell about your paragraph.
I picked the piece titled Fast Food because in interested me. Also it interested me because a lot of people like fast food and people die from fast food and get obese.
In conclusion I improved in my vocabulary and also I improved in my sentence variety. I think I improved because last year in fifth grade I didn’t write in paragraphs.
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